I'm going to go with Jakobe
Sky actually had some pretty cool lines throughout the entire thing, but he didn't really start using any personals until his second verse. The first verse was good, and some of the punches were clever, but it would have been nicer if he had thrown in some more noticeable personals. By the time the second verse comes around it's almost too late.
Also, I felt like Jakobe had better overall flow, and that is going to play a big part in my voting this year.
On another note, you probably shouldn't pick someone's beat if you are going to make fun of their music. Even if you were using it as a diss it's kind of irrelevant.
Overall a lot of good punches from Sky, but better personals and flow from Jakobe.
PSA: Gay jokes aren't funny. Gay jokes will only take away from your performance, unless they are ridiculously clever.
"I got a new project for y'all, it's called 'suck my dick'"
It's a metaphor. That actually happened, though.
Nice guys. What happened to that cypher with all the clabtrap people?
It's supposed to be being mixed. Who knows what's happening to it.
HEY HOW ABOUT NEXT TIME YOU MAYBE ASK BEFORE YOU USE MY VOCAL TRACKS. ALRIGHT BUDDY? LIKE ASK...OR SOMETHING!
Asking is for women and the French.
The lead synth on that drop is amazing. Well done. I'm just now starting to look around on Newgrounds and am blown away by how great a lot of you guys are.
This is incredibly well made. This is amazing. Well done
Bill showed me your tracks, and I just wanted to say that they are great man. I really like the simplicity of this one.
Its all good...I would just say work on the mixing. Maybe less reverb...clean up the vocals up a bit. Good stuff overall though
Thanks for your review, ill take the tips!
Edit: I eliminated the distortion effect and put less reverb!
"a parody of a parody isnt really that funny" haha Good shit
Damn it may be the weed but i really like this. Especially the main loop near the beginning
Nothing wrong with that. Good beats are made for weed.
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